To all those that think they know me
To all those that pretend they care
To all those that want to kill me
To all those that want to dare
To all those that need to push me
You will not knock me down
I have been bruised,
I have been scarred
I have been shaken
I have been disturbed
But there is one thing you can’t do to me
I stand firm in what I do
You cannot push me down
You can leave your mark
You can hate me and hurt me
But you will never make me die.
Responce
Good job........... I liked it expecially were it states "you can leave your mark" and "I have been shaken bruised scarred disturbed" it was simple and meaningful with a nice
rap up. OH and the to all those that.........
Final Rating--------------- 8.5/10
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